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As the media continues to grow, our young celebrity adults are always under fire and getting criticized by fans all over the world, the question is are we causing the pressure.  

 

First Paragraph:  Young teens(who), the media and their lifes(what) Now and the future(when), We want to know everything about what they are doing(why), through the fast growing media(how)

 

Other Details/Final Minor Details: Is this hurting or not harming the young teens at all.  Justin Bieber,Raven,LiLo and other young teen stars.  Is media to blame or is it the publics fault for the way that the young adults are acting out?

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